I read his thesis, and it looks like complete crap. A master's thesis... for the War College... and it's only 14 double-spaced pages? Seriously?
For purposes of comparison, one of the classes I teach at West Point, the introductory to International Relations class that EVERY cadet has to take to graduate, has a requirement of 15 pages. That's a core course in an undergrad program. My first master's thesis was at least 40 pages, the one I did at NDIC was more than 100 pages (IIRC), and at Yale we didn't even have a thesis requirement but we still had to do at least one paper of at least 25 pages.
I'm embarrassed for the War College that this is what they think passes for graduate-level scholarship.
This is my professor agreeing with peers who've told me to pursue civilian education. This persona has worked with many of the foremost minds in International Relations and Diplomacy (e.g. Kissinger, John Mearsheimer, David Lake, etc): "I do agree with the assessment of taking a higher degree in a civilian discipline. The Army is everything now but you will eventually retire and want to take your efforts elsewhere without having to redo them."
This is why, as stated in my earlier e-mail, Military Master's degrees are not taken seriously with civilian academia.