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I'm wondering where James picked up a bleeding disease that is compromising his mental status... and when, and why it wasn't caught in his physicals. But, hey, I'm a medic and a runny nose under stress is a giveaway.
I'm wondering where James picked up a bleeding disease that is compromising his mental status... and when, and why it wasn't caught in his physicals. But, hey, I'm a medic and a runny nose under stress is a giveaway.
Mara, check a few of your construction issues, and misuse of past where a past participle was called for... one specific is the use of sprung where the correct word is sprang, and Chief Collins, and Faith speaking yet it is attributed to the DCO.... hey, I realize you don't have an NCO or even a SP4 to edit for you....:-"
It wasn’t until much later that Faith found out how true those words were.
No really, that's all for this case study ;)OR IS IT?!
Most likely. Hopefully the next one won't take five months + to tellSetting us up for another one, sir?
As many of you recall (and have already stated earlier in this case) the mad cow thing actually happened to a guy in 5th Group. The details in this story are made up, but there really was a guy who had his tab revoked, and it wasn't until much later that they figured out he had the disease. He died shortly thereafter, but IIRC they got him his tab back before he passed. Out of respect for this individual's memory, I want to make it clear that any serious misconduct attributed to CPT James in the story... like the adultery thing, the laptop, and especially Chief Rollins getting punched in the face, is a complete fabrication and the real-life Special Forces Soldier never did any of those things.Wha...
Damn. Didn't expect that!
:) there are also references to at least three members of the site in this case study.Also didn't expect to see a comment relating to MY in there. LOL
there are also references to at least three members of the site in this case study.
A portly sergeant handed over a large paper bag containing CPT James’s belongings, and provided the information they had so far. James’s truck was found in the parking lot of Range 37, a small arms range frequented by members of the unit for both training and recreational shooting. James had his .45 on the seat beside him, along with two boxes of ammunition and a couple of paper targets. His seat was leaned back, his eyes were closed, and his hands were folded I his lap. He was found by members of a conventional unit who had signed for the range for the day. He was found by Range Control when they came to get the range ready for the day’s shooting. The first ones to find James said it looked like he had fallen asleep in his truck while waiting for the range to open. They called the MPs when their efforts to rouse James failed. The MP further noted that the ignition was in the “on” position and that the truck had run out of gas. James’ nose was slightly bloody but there were no other marks on his body. At the moment, the speculation was that James had fallen asleep with the engine running while waiting for the range to open, and had succumbed to carbon monoxide poisoning. But there was going to be a full autopsy just to make sure.
there are also references to at least three members of the site in this case study.
lol, I had no one in mind when I came up with that character. He was part of a plot line that I worked on for a day or two and then abandoned, that description of him is all that remained when I got done editing. But "Paul," "CPT Criss," and "CPT Chen" are all characters who are named after site members. There have been others in earlier case studies as well.I figured this was me. Not very well concealed...
I enjoyed writing it, thank you (and many others) for the earlier input. Many times the story changes from what I had in mind based on what people suggest in these posts.Good fucking story sir. Well-written. Thank you for thaking the time to write it.
Thanks for the story sir. I'm looking forward to the next one already. Hopefully you can start (and hopefully finish..) one prior to my shipping in September. I don't know if I could handle the suspense of dragging out the finish:-".
I read all about the real life story of the SF soldier from 5th Group as my recruiter was very involved in that whole story. So I believe a great take away would be to never question your gut in regards to noticing a dramatic change in someone's behavior and demeanor. It was obvious that many characters had a feeling that something was wrong with him. With that said, even if there is a medical/logical reason behind poor behavior, action needs to be taken swiftly. Oh, and I also learned that it is not wise to store home-made porn on government issue computers.
The case study reaffirmed a lot of things wise men beat into me years ago which was that if someone's behaviour changes dramatically and they don't have a history of being a sack you owe it to them to find out what is causing it and help if you can. In short know your people.
0699 is NOT portly. Just sayin'. ;)I figured this was me. Not very well concealed...
Good fucking story sir. Well-written. Thank you for thaking the time to write it.