Sorry, it's the grammar nazi in me, Sir.
Change made, thank you.
Sorry, it's the grammar nazi in me, Sir.
Im just so darn excited I had to tell you, Mara! Keep goingggggggggggggggggg!
lol
"Faith woke up and realized it was all a dream. But turning towards his dresser, he saw something that hadn't been there before- a tan baseball cap with a subdued US flag sewn onto it. Was it real? Was it imagined? Was he ever even in the military to begin with? The world will never know..."
THE END
;)
WooHoo, my story made it in the story!!Sewn? I thought it was supposed to be hook and loop? Oh wait, my bad. Facts are skewered to protect the innocent... or guilty. LOL
I would say that arranging a transfer after such a short time would not endear him to the SOF side of the army and might result in him not getting any further assignments there but I say that not knowing how all that works in actuality.
The pic of the "squashed bug" was quite helpful too, so thanks for that. I don't understand why the sudden cut off at seeing a CW5? That's a bit confusing to a civvie like me.
W5's scare Generals, SF W5's are one step below God himself.
Hm, I think I have clipart for that.
So an NCO found your clip art for you? Cool.
Most NCOs try to keep my clip art from me...
The issues in the S2 shop aside, it seems Faith is experiencing a bit of culture shock coming into an unconventional unit. He should tough it out.
I don't view the fireside chat with the W5 as a bad thing. I'm not surprised he took the time to check Faith out, or that he took the time to sit down with him.
The ass-chewing he handed out wasn't overboard and will probably help to separate him from The Dud's poor reputation and the one the S2 shop enjoys under his command.
I think Faith should tough it out and stay. More opportunity for big drama. And perhaps he can order someone to paint and spruce the place up if he hangs on.