As far as I can tell this "draft" should be sent right to China...
1st: Sovereignty – "States have, in accordance with the Charter of the United Nations and the principles of international law, the sovereign right to determine and manage their approach to public health, notably pandemic prevention, ... provided that activities within their jurisdiction or control do not cause damage to their peoples and other countries. (Ok sounds pretty good...)
2nd: Equity – "The absence of unfair, avoidable or remediable differences, including in their capacities, among and within countries, including between groups of people,...or by other dimensions of inequality, is central to equity. Effective pandemic prevention...cannot be achieved without...commitments in addressing the structural challenges in inequitable access to fair, equitable and timely access to affordable, safe and efficacious pandemic-related products and services, essential health services, information and social support, as well as tackling the inequities in terms of technology, health workforce, infrastructure and financing,...
(the 2 billion people on Earth with decent standards of living can send their $$$ and people to take care of the other 5 billion...)
3rd: Transparency – The effective prevention of, preparedness for and response to pandemics depends on transparent, open and timely sharing, access to and disclosure of accurate information, data and other relevant elements that may come to light... (Looking at you China..)
4th: Accountability: - "All Parties shall cooperate with other States and relevant international organizations, in order to collectively strengthen, support and sustain capacities for global prevention, preparedness, response and recovery of health systems." (Once again....China?)
5th: "States that hold more resources relevant to pandemics, including pandemic-related products and manufacturing capacity, should bear, where appropriate, a commensurate degree of differentiated responsibility with regard to global pandemic prevention, preparedness, response and recovery. With the aim of supporting every Party to achieve the highest level of proven and sustained capacity,..." (China again I guess)