I liked you
I liked your paper. And I love that you provided endnotes with sources.
After a quick reading, I noticed a number of minor errors ("effect" where you should have "affect," "having" instead of "have," etc.). You may see these as cosmetic, but they detract from the overall message and effect of your paper. I also thought it was too long for something to send to a Congressman; do you think you could shorten in dramatically and still convey the main points? (maybe it's not possible).
Next time you get ready to send something like this out, consider posting it up here on the site. I do that quite often, under the idea "none of us are as smart as all of us." Having more eyes on what you write helps detect errors and provides useful suggestions for improving the overall message.
Again, well done on the paper.